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【雅思作文】规避中国式结尾

【雅思作文】规避中国式结尾

学校:朗阁(沈阳)培训中心 时间:2012-12-19 13:37:59
摘要:由于惯性思维,很多烤鸭们在雅思作文的结尾段非常容易出现中国式的结尾,使用感情诉诸的手法激起读者的感情,结果是口号很丰满,得分很骨感。朗阁名师针对这个问题为大家推出了几种不同的结尾方式来帮助大家赢得雅思作文高分。
 
【沈阳朗阁讯】由于惯性思维,很多烤鸭们在雅思作文的结尾段非常容易出现中国式的结尾,使用感情诉诸的手法激起读者的感情,结果是口号很丰满,得分很骨感。朗阁名师针对这个问题为大家推出了几种不同的结尾方式来帮助大家赢得雅思作文高分。

NO1、解决问题式结尾:
1. As long as..., …is bound to…
例句:As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.
2. It is only if...that we will…
例句:It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.
 
NO2、总结归纳式结尾:
Topic : The development of science and technology benefit our life. However, scientists cannot find effective solutions to the problems they created. To what degree do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结尾段:In conclusion, confronted with these problems, scientists are seeking prompt and feasible solutions. The development of science and technology bring about both positive and negative effects to us. We must eliminate the positive effects to the least extent.

NO3、展望未来式结尾:
Topic : Traditional arts civilized a nation. Do you think government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors or drama companies? What should a government do?
结尾段:It is high time we took effective measures. Firstly, the government should lay a fund for the research and promotion of traditional arts. Moreover, the research institutes and universities should work out a long-term developing scheme, organizing systematic research on traditional arts. Arts belong to a nation and the whole world as well. The prosperity of traditional arts will diversify the culture of the world.

NO4、重述中心式结尾:
Topic : Intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings. Please discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
结尾段:In short, robots are subsidiary to human beings. However competent they are in various kinds of field, robots will never take the place of human beings and play a decisive role in our work and life.
 
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