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新托福写作:造句的功力
 
朗阁海外考试研究中心
 
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新托福写作的评分标准和雅思写作的评分标准基本相似,在语言上的考察点也很高,所以新托福考试在语言上一定要引起高度的重视。词汇的重要性,包括遣词和造句两个方面。这一系列中,朗阁海外考试研究中心写作组的专家将为大家介绍其中之二,如何达到造句的高分。
 
造句要做到准确、多样以及高分表达
 
I      准确的句子表达
1.    句型分析
英语的句型包括以下几种,简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中,一般使用复合句,辅以并列句和并列复合句,当然肯定要有简单句,做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。
a.                       Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
这句话是一个复合句,由even though引导的让步状语从句。
 
b.                       This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中,有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。
 
c.                       I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子,是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。
 
d.                       Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子,成为并列句,再一个which引导的定语从句。
 
2.         有问题的句子的列举
朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为,考生写的句子容易出现三个问题:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接连句,三是句子连接不正确。
1).破碎句
所谓破碎句,就是句子不完整,通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式,如分词),或者是从句单独成句。
破碎句:She singing alone. (无谓语,singing是现在分词)
正确句:She is singing alone.
 
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)
正确句:He did not come because he was sick.
 
2).接连句
       所谓接连据,就是两个句子直接连在一起,既未使用连词,也未使用正确的标点符号。
接连句:   Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正确句一:      Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正确句二:      Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
 
3).句子连接不正确
       所谓句子连接不正确,就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接,这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。
不正确句:      Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正确句:       Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
 
II           高分表达
除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外,朗阁海外考试研究中心建议新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式,以使句型多样化。句型
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